Sunday Morning - Bridget Jones
Here we have a peaceful beach scene with long shadows creating interesting patterns on the sand. But to create more attention and to hold the viewer it would be very helpful to have something of interest to ponder on rather than visually wander through the scene. Perhaps someone sitting on that large rock, or a child running from the surf, or a seagull perched on a stone, or whatever - something to attract and hold the viewer's attention.
B Grade - Accepted